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		<title>By: Jim Lodico</title>
		<link>http://www.whitepapersolution.com/white-paper-design-tips/comment-page-1#comment-144</link>
		<dc:creator>Jim Lodico</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Apr 2010 15:49:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you again for your input John. 

Please note that while you are correct in that the proper form of the verb &quot;to be&quot; when used with the plural &quot;tips&quot; is &quot;are&quot; it is important to note both the conversational style and informal tone of this article. 

In this case, while the use of the contraction &quot;here&#039;s&quot; may not be grammatically correct, its use is a stylistic decision intended to create a conversational tone.

And while yes, the use of contractions is frowned upon in formal writing, you can see that the informal use of the second person throughout the article sets an informal tone for the piece. 

The style and tone of a written piece are of great importance. Consideration for both the target audience (or &quot;viewer&quot;) and the format of the piece need to be considered when developing the tone of a written work. 

Please don&#039;t confuse editorial &quot;avoidance&quot; with an editorial decision.

Finally, it is important to note that these articles are not intended to provide grammatical directions or instructions. They are provided to help others with a specific writing process. And while grammar is an important part of the writing process, you will not find &quot;proper grammatical directions&quot; in any of these articles. I&#039;ll leave that to Strunk &amp; White.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you again for your input John. </p>
<p>Please note that while you are correct in that the proper form of the verb &#8220;to be&#8221; when used with the plural &#8220;tips&#8221; is &#8220;are&#8221; it is important to note both the conversational style and informal tone of this article. </p>
<p>In this case, while the use of the contraction &#8220;here&#8217;s&#8221; may not be grammatically correct, its use is a stylistic decision intended to create a conversational tone.</p>
<p>And while yes, the use of contractions is frowned upon in formal writing, you can see that the informal use of the second person throughout the article sets an informal tone for the piece. </p>
<p>The style and tone of a written piece are of great importance. Consideration for both the target audience (or &#8220;viewer&#8221;) and the format of the piece need to be considered when developing the tone of a written work. </p>
<p>Please don&#8217;t confuse editorial &#8220;avoidance&#8221; with an editorial decision.</p>
<p>Finally, it is important to note that these articles are not intended to provide grammatical directions or instructions. They are provided to help others with a specific writing process. And while grammar is an important part of the writing process, you will not find &#8220;proper grammatical directions&#8221; in any of these articles. I&#8217;ll leave that to Strunk &amp; White.</p>
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		<title>By: John Roldan</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Roldan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Apr 2010 05:58:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Why is it that I continue to be amazed at the lack of editing of articles posted on the Internet?  By now, one would think that I would be use to it and simply “move on” whenever I come across another example of editorial avoidance.  But, when an article is posted for the expressed purpose of providing the viewer with proper grammatical directions and examples, I am even more troubled when that article demonstrates a lack of editorial excellence.

I would like to bring to your attention that your paragraph heading, “Here’s a few tips to make your white paper easier to read” should be edited to “Here’re a few tips to make your white paper easier to read” as you are referring to a plural word “tips,” not the singular “tip.”

You should also consider that the use of contractions is frowned on in formal writing. As both grammatical errors I now have noted refer to misused contractions, maybe you should avoid them altogether. The correct heading should be “Here are a few tips to make your white paper easier to read.”

When such common errors are included in your articles, and remain there for over a year, I am left with an uncomfortable feeling that I should be skeptical of the accuracy of your instructions. I often make grammatical errors.  But I am not providing instructions such as those contained in these articles.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why is it that I continue to be amazed at the lack of editing of articles posted on the Internet?  By now, one would think that I would be use to it and simply “move on” whenever I come across another example of editorial avoidance.  But, when an article is posted for the expressed purpose of providing the viewer with proper grammatical directions and examples, I am even more troubled when that article demonstrates a lack of editorial excellence.</p>
<p>I would like to bring to your attention that your paragraph heading, “Here’s a few tips to make your white paper easier to read” should be edited to “Here’re a few tips to make your white paper easier to read” as you are referring to a plural word “tips,” not the singular “tip.”</p>
<p>You should also consider that the use of contractions is frowned on in formal writing. As both grammatical errors I now have noted refer to misused contractions, maybe you should avoid them altogether. The correct heading should be “Here are a few tips to make your white paper easier to read.”</p>
<p>When such common errors are included in your articles, and remain there for over a year, I am left with an uncomfortable feeling that I should be skeptical of the accuracy of your instructions. I often make grammatical errors.  But I am not providing instructions such as those contained in these articles.</p>
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		<title>By: Ambal Balakrishnan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ambal Balakrishnan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Jul 2009 21:53:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great post Jim. It is very important to make white papers readable/scannable. Some of the great white papers I have seen are very visually appealing to the eye because of the layout. 
I have listed a few blog posts that are in line with your thoughts.
Graham Strong&#039;s &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2008/04/04/3-ways-to-appeal-to-readers-skimmers/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;3 Ways to Appeal to Readers &amp; Skimmers&lt;/a&gt;
Jonathan Kantor&#039;s &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.whitepapercompany.com/blog/?p=1138&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Six ‘Attention-Getting’ White Paper Elements&lt;/a&gt;, &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.whitepapercompany.com/blog/?p=1424&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt; 5 Tips to Best Utilize your Sidebar White Space&lt;/a&gt;, &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.whitepapercompany.com/blog/?p=1351&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;How NOT to Format a White Paper!&lt;/a&gt;, &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.whitepapercompany.com/blog/?p=1467&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;5 Steps to a Great White Paper Introduction&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post Jim. It is very important to make white papers readable/scannable. Some of the great white papers I have seen are very visually appealing to the eye because of the layout.<br />
I have listed a few blog posts that are in line with your thoughts.<br />
Graham Strong&#8217;s <a href="http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2008/04/04/3-ways-to-appeal-to-readers-skimmers/" rel="nofollow">3 Ways to Appeal to Readers &amp; Skimmers</a><br />
Jonathan Kantor&#8217;s <a href="http://www.whitepapercompany.com/blog/?p=1138" rel="nofollow">Six ‘Attention-Getting’ White Paper Elements</a>, <a href="http://www.whitepapercompany.com/blog/?p=1424" rel="nofollow"> 5 Tips to Best Utilize your Sidebar White Space</a>, <a href="http://www.whitepapercompany.com/blog/?p=1351" rel="nofollow">How NOT to Format a White Paper!</a>, <a href="http://www.whitepapercompany.com/blog/?p=1467" rel="nofollow">5 Steps to a Great White Paper Introduction</a></p>
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		<title>By: Jim Lodico</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jim Lodico</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Jul 2009 14:27:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Mike.

I thought Feedburner offered email subscriptions in the feed link at the top. Unless I&#039;m missing something, it appears that they dropped that feature when they switched to Google.

I&#039;ve added a subscription box in the side bar for email blog updates through Feedburner. 

Hope it helps,

Jim</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Mike.</p>
<p>I thought Feedburner offered email subscriptions in the feed link at the top. Unless I&#8217;m missing something, it appears that they dropped that feature when they switched to Google.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve added a subscription box in the side bar for email blog updates through Feedburner. </p>
<p>Hope it helps,</p>
<p>Jim</p>
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		<title>By: Michael A. Stelzner</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michael A. Stelzner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Jun 2009 20:49:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Jim;

Nice article!  Would you please consider enabling email notification with Feedburner?

Mike</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Jim;</p>
<p>Nice article!  Would you please consider enabling email notification with Feedburner?</p>
<p>Mike</p>
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